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Oct 26 2015

Revision

revisionWhile NaNoWriMo is the 10% process of spilling your words on the page, revision is the 90% that comes after.  If we spend November on our first drafts, (optimistically finishing the first drafts of our novels) we will be confronted in December with the end results, and this means revision, revision, revision.
I read somewhere (forgive me, I can’t remember where) that more people prefer revision to creating the original draft on a blank page.  If that is the case, then December and the following year should offer a lovely present in the form of lots of raw material with which to work.  For the rest of the writers, the detailed task of revision may be less pleasurable.

Regardless, for any NaNoWriMo first draft novel to be viable, revision is essential.  Revision, however, involves many layers:  Developmental (or Content) editing; Substantive Editing; Copyediting; and Proofreading.  Further, multiple revisions will likely be required, unless the writer is a fabulous first draft writer or reviser.

I plan to participate in NaNoWriMo, but I’m well aware that the end result will be only the tip of my writing iceberg.

Written by Aline Soules · Categorized: Writing · Tagged: craft, revision, writing process

Mar 10 2015

The Gift of Feedback

feedback-headsRecently, I’ve been fortunate to receive feedback on a number of pieces of my work.  This is such a gift.  You can write and write and write, but, eventually, you need other eyes to see what you can’t see because you’re too close to what you’ve written.  It all makes sense to you; then, someone comes along and is puzzled.

There are different types of feedback, but it’s all good.  You can make the most of it by accepting it.  This doesn’t mean you have to implement everything that’s suggested, but it does mean you need to set your ego aside and not take it personally.  People who are generous enough to give you feedback are your best writing friends.  Their honest feedback enables you to revise in ways you couldn’t have without their input. Feedback can range from the general to the structural to the syntax to the grammar.  Take it.  Figure out what resonates with your goals for the piece and make the most of it.

Photo credit:  Biodick

Written by Aline Soules · Categorized: Writing · Tagged: critique, feedback, revision, writing

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